Old Shoes

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By Lifes a Dance

for so long ive walked in these old shoes, stumbling along feeling so blue, the soles are worn the leather faded from walking a walk i always hated. then one day by this little church i walked, i stopped in my tracks as if these old shoes could talk. they said fear not you will stumble no more all you have to do is open those doors. inside these doors i found family and hope, just when i thought i could no longer cope. my life has changed so much and i know this much is true, when you walk with jesus even old shoes feel new.

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August 6, 2010 14:43 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

this poem says so much in such a short time.It speaks far more than what words are actually written. To me, that is as close to perfection, and still leaves room for improvment. awesome!

August 6, 2010 14:49 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

Noticed on "FAITH"s poetry, you mentioned brown county, indiana and the beautiful colorful hills there in the fall. i love that place too. simply beautiful. that coment on her sight brought me to read your poetry. very good.