My life

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By Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*

screaming and crying inside my life is a total hell wishing one day in pride my heart to stop aching as i hold the razor in my hand i watch as my arm bleeds one cut after another my heart skipping every other beat as i lay restless on my bed i say so what about what other people think as the days go by the cuts get deeper and deeper hiding my arm when around certain people hoping i wont get sent away i wish i could tell my aunt so i can get some help but scared to death of what she'll say everyday when i look at my arm i ask myself why and all i can come up with is "its the only pain i can control" my arm is bleeding so much now my pain is unexplainable hoping i wont slice a vein i cut deeper and deeper as the blood drips from my arm i say its my life who cares what i do

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April 2, 2010 20:34*Psychopathic Child*

That is one intense poem I like it very well written. Sorry you feel that way though not much help sorry. great poem

lol. its ok. im good for now. thank you.

April 3, 2010 18:50Disruptive Silence

Wow. this poem is very intense. There is always help somewhere, dont worry

yeah. thank you for your comments.

April 14, 2010 21:44Jameela

wow...the emotion in this

April 17, 2010 16:15Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*

thank you.

June 21, 2010 09:26Invisible Poet

remember your friends, if you ever need to talk there are people who will listen, always there, very powerful piece, good writing ash