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By ~The Familiar Side of Strange~

in a mind and of a heart we will fall then we part time is short love still grows we are lost but now we know our greatest fears in those lies one gives up the other dies so its written in Fate's book into the future is where you look for love to last and last it must we need the fight fight for the just-- cause to heal no more pain her tears are shed they are his rain she drowns in hate he in her sorrow wondering why she'll wake tomrrow

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April 14, 2010 19:08StarStarlit

WOW!...i simply think tht this is an AMAZING poem-i cant even write like this LOL...it is really good, and really sadd...i can actually relate...it reminds me of a break up, and also a little bit of a depressed state, almost leaning towards suicide, like in the lest line "wondering why, she'll wake tomorrow"-tht guy must have been important to her...but the poem is amazing, anyone i bet can relate to a broken heart, but suicide is not the way...trust me...im happy to be alive:)...but either ways, i love it-ttylz xD xoxo