Gone

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By intoyou

You were the sun that shined abvoe but now your gone and my days are gray and miserable You were the stars that lit up the sky but now your gone and my nights are dark and empty You were the bird that chirped my songs but now your gone and im left in silence You were my everything but now your gone and you've taken everything with you

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April 1, 2010 05:03baya

proses seem to be common on your page but this is good

April 3, 2010 13:46CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART

This is good. keep writing!

April 4, 2010 07:38intoyou

thanks :)

April 14, 2010 19:31Lovecrafter

really sad. and it's my favorite kind. hardly any rhymes.

April 18, 2010 17:58LostSoul

love this poem...reminds me of what I've gone through

November 4, 2012 21:00Malcolm Moss

I read this over and over. So simple, yet saying so much.