Secret Love, by raining smiles
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immature words spoken
eyes stare in aww
at what they see
covering all the surfaces
me and her
so why me now...
serious words written
thoughts and theories arise
feelings crushed
friendship deteriate
harsh words yelled
hands wailing
balled up fists
gritted teeth
lust
tears
lies..
Beautiful Secret Love |
| Posted: 2010-04-19 20:36:37 UTC |
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| 2010-04-25 20:00:40 | Cloudywindows |
| wow I like this. You have a talent many don't. |
| 2010-04-25 21:31:19 | raining smiles |
| thanks for the awesome comments. I appriciate it |
| 2010-06-16 16:22:26 | zishan evans |
| Life can have its moments of pain, but we must recover.We must learn from it and move on.Your poem expresses that lingering sadness we can feel.
Zishan |