Secret Love

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By raining smiles •

immature words spoken eyes stare in aww at what they see covering all the surfaces me and her so why me now... serious words written thoughts and theories arise feelings crushed friendship deteriate harsh words yelled hands wailing balled up fists gritted teeth lust tears lies.. Beautiful Secret Love

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April 20, 2010 14:59Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*

wow. this is really good mah dear. i love it. was this written about "him"?

April 25, 2010 20:00Cloudywindows

wow I like this. You have a talent many don't.

April 25, 2010 21:31raining smiles

thanks for the awesome comments. I appriciate it

June 16, 2010 16:22zishan evans

Life can have its moments of pain, but we must recover.We must learn from it and move on.Your poem expresses that lingering sadness we can feel.
Zishan