dear mum by paul dakin age 17, by paul dakin Subscribe to rss feed for paul dakin

dear mum 
i just thought i,d say
 i love you and goodbye 
we will miss you dearly 
i promise i wont cry 
i will never forget our talks
conversations on the phone
how happy you where to see me
when i finally came home
you worried about me so much
i worried about you to 
i know this is the hardest thing
weve had to do
i know you always be with me whereever i go
no one needs to show me i will always know
i dont want to say goodbye but we will meet again some day
were we left off
before you went off
i miss you loads mummy i think about you every day.

Posted: 2010-05-21 10:30:15 UTC

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2010-04-25 21:11:17Cloudywindows
This is beautiful man. get this published.

2010-05-21 10:26:54paul dakin
thanks but how do i do it

2010-05-25 21:00:53Cloudywindows
Well you can go to google and type in "publish a poem" and basicly you can send them to publishers and they'll publish them and you can even get paid for it. if you ever want to collaborate on a poem let me know. my email is [email protected]