dear mum by paul dakin age 17

By paul dakin • May 21, 2010 10:30 UTC

dear mum i just thought i,d say i love you and goodbye we will miss you dearly i promise i wont cry i will never forget our talks conversations on the phone how happy you where to see me when i finally came home you worried about me so much i worried about you to i know this is the hardest thing weve had to do i know you always be with me whereever i go no one needs to show me i will always know i dont want to say goodbye but we will meet again some day were we left off before you went off i miss you loads mummy i think about you every day.

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April 25, 2010 21:11Cloudywindows

This is beautiful man. get this published.

May 21, 2010 10:26paul dakin

thanks but how do i do it

May 25, 2010 21:00Cloudywindows

Well you can go to google and type in "publish a poem" and basicly you can send them to publishers and they'll publish them and you can even get paid for it. if you ever want to collaborate on a poem let me know. my email is [email protected]