Love in Letters

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By Cloudywindows •

I wasn’t the first to call her my own I was just a boy who couldn’t stand to be alone Wrote her day after day of being away Long after the sun went down and we went our separate ways Now the clouds cover my blue sky After uncovering lie after lie Forget those words and the little brown book No heart can sustain the damage mine took Hope you enjoyed, Criticism or comments are welcomed. Cloudy. ([email protected])

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April 25, 2010 19:46excutterxoxo

Awww...this is really pretty, yet sad when you think about it. It is beautiful though. It sounds like you have been through something rough. And thanks for commenting on my poem-ur awesome. And i am sorry for what had happened. You can always email me at [email protected] This is really good, and i hope you find what you are looking for in life. TTYLz xD xoxo

May 4, 2010 20:31MySurrender

Sad and gentle, but cuts deep! Lovely!

May 17, 2010 03:41~Angela~

kwol-sounds sad

May 21, 2010 10:28paul dakin

i dont know how you thought about that but it is brill well done i think we could make one up to gether