Alone
By wishing_on_stars •
Right now I feel so small
Like I don't even exist at all
I try to belong
Not to do anything wrong
But it seems that no one can see
The lonely girl, that is me
Copyright 2005 JEM
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May 7, 2005 23:55PoetryReconised
I realate to this. Thank-you :) You are a good poet!
May 12, 2005 02:58wishing_on_stars
You're very welcomed and thank you
May 13, 2005 11:08Cute One
This is a great poem but the thing that made me a bit upset was that you make it seem as though no-one at all loves you but like i said in the poem of mine "Nothing." There is something there that loves you and that hugs you all the time, His name is Jesus and he thinks you are wonderful. He thinks that you are just marvelous.
May 14, 2005 03:06wishing_on_stars
I know that I'm not completely alone. I'm also a follower of Jesus Christ. It was only capturing the feeling that I had the moment that I wrote it. I just felt invisible, it has nothing to do with no one loving me. I know that I'm loved. Thank you for your feed back.
July 27, 2005 00:41Stacey
I love this poem it speaks to me a lot i totally understand where ur coming from
November 24, 2005 22:27F@LLeN_@NgEL
I really like this, well done xXx
January 8, 2006 22:09egyptian_girl
GR88! small but has it all!