when your gone

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By angelbaby94

since the day i met you we have been together open and true like there was nothing we couldn't do but now its a whole new side twisted and broken on the inside now we both try to hide at the start we laughed now i just cry we use to be alive and spread our wings and fly but now were dead how can this be when your gone i hurt can't you see when your near i heal when were together i can feel but when your gone it all goes wrong with a drop of my tear on a scary fear when your gone i feel alone and stoned against this ugly wall when your gone i crumble and can't help but fall day by day we grew stronger as we got closer but now i have nothing left to say when your gone my heart breaks and full of hate but when your with me my heart soars and i feel so strong because our love and friendship is some song when your gone i start thinking maybe i can......feel the blood dripping its a red flood then you come you reach my hand for me to grow and stand i can see your lovely face i picture it in my brain and it can't erase but yet i watch you leave when your gone how can this be your my best best best friend for us this can't be the end were more then bffs were sisters but when i stayed to bleed you couldn't stand it my sister can to help me because she cares for me it was surely happening when your gone though its hard to breath like i was weak and so breathless i didn't have the power to speak but then you come back to support your sis in her time of need i can't believe she was there for me when your gone i know for sure it won't be for long because when we're together nothing can break us and we are strong when your gone my dear loving sis i won't be afraid because i know i see you each and everyday that makes me ok you won't leave ever because i know this we will be sisters and bffs for now and forever ***** i love u sis.....plz.....don't leave....lolz***** xD

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May 2, 2010 19:50excutterxoxo

anna...this is beautiful...it really is, but im not "leaving" u, idk y u think tht...ur my bff/sis for goodness sake...if i hang out with some girls and guys, it doesnt mean betrayal or abandonment, etc...

i am here, and i luvya, and this peom is really good...but i am here...and i never changed-lolz ttylz bff xoxo =:3

May 2, 2010 19:53StarStarlit

i agree lolz (same person) lolz xD great poem-but ur bff, diana (me) will never leave u lolz-luvya lolz xD

May 2, 2010 20:05*+*+barbed+*+*wire*+*+*

great poem. . .
it sounded kinduv like a love poem at first, like what u say about a guy ur in love with to ur friends.
but its a great thing though, family.
i hope ur sis doesn't leave u
;)

June 6, 2010 16:54maddy_7929

gorgeous poem..
good rhymes,too..