#1 (him) & #2 (her)

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By </3 Love is a pain in the ass</3

#1 I love you! #2 you're lying! #1 Why do you think I am lying? #2 Because you would never tell me that you love me, unless you did something wrong!, what did you do? #1 I...I...I didn't do anything... #2 Yes...Yes you did...You stuttered, you only stutter when you are lying...What did you do?! #1 I'm sorry... #2 What did you do?! #1 I don't want to hurt you #2 WHAT DID YOU DO?!?! #1 I didn't do anything...yet... #2 OK what are you "going" to do? #1 you'll see in the morning... #2 Fine...good-night. #1 No...good-bye... -That next morning- #2 Good-morning!, confusion crosses the face, Where are you?... -silence fills the room- #2 WHERE ARE YOU?! -silence continues- #2 You are gone...aren't you?, WHY! why did you leave me?!?! -That night- The face is very pale, and no longer there, the eyes are bright red, and no longer open, the heart is broken, and no longer beating, as you may already know...this, as you know her as, #2...is no longer here with us. ____________________________________________________________ you may have read my bio, and how all my poetry is about my life...well this is not about my life, it is a short story I wanted to write and share with you all. ____________________________________________________________

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May 8, 2010 17:46excutterxoxo

aww this is really good, yet so sadd...i think i would cry if tht were me rofl :) and what did u mean shes not here with us? u mean suicide? omg...it gets sadder and sadder, yet it is extremely beautiful, you did a great job :) it would actually make a great short story and/or book lolz...i can imagine myself reading a story and ending it like tht...great job tho-ttylz xoxo

May 9, 2010 19:53

Thanx! yeah suicide...it was just something in my head so I wrote it and posted it:)

November 21, 2010 02:30mustanglover97

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