SunKissed SnowFlakes..., by excutterxoxo Subscribe to rss feed for excutterxoxo

((I imagine the song Two Is Better Than One by Boys Like
Girls ft. Taylor Swift playing in the background))

"A daydream I once had..."


Sunkissed Snowflakes,
fall into my hair.
Your heavy breath is all I feel,
in this fragile, dense air.

The warm comfort of my soul,
as you wrap your arms around me.
The look in your eyes,
and the warmth of your heart,
is all that is needed to set me free.

As time slows down,
the world stops turning.
I look at you,
I'm fine now,
with you there watching.

We walk together,
in a field,
of sunkissed snowflakes.
While children sing carols,
and lovebirds skate on all the frozen lakes.

Christmas is coming,
it is my first Christmas with you.
Openening gifts,
and teasing each other with 5-year-old things,
I wait for the snowstorm to come over our house soon.

We run in the streets,
all of the local padestrians watch us.
Can't keep up with this madness,
can't keep up with this obsession.

You run your fingers,
through my hair.
The sound of your voice,
flows through the air.

And as the sunkissed snowflakes,
fall onto my face.
I still love your eyes,
even though you are a different race...

((please tell me what you think, this one took me forever
with editing and recorrecting lol thnxx xoxo))
Posted: 2010-06-06 21:22:10 UTC

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2010-06-06 19:54:37angelbaby94
OMGGG THIS IS BEAUTIFUL JUST WONDERFUL-U SHOULD BE A WRITER U WOULD BE VERY SUCCESSFUL -I CAN TELL LOLZ - WE WILL BOTH BE FAMOUS WRITERS AND SHARE OUR GREAT POEMS AND STORIES LMAO-KEEP IT UP SIS ILY XOXO XD

2010-07-04 19:41:38Don't build lies on ice cubes.
love this.

2010-07-22 22:34:12Silent-Black-Sheep
Awesome poem