shooting star

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By angelbaby94 •

whats that across the sky something so beautiful and shine full of golden sparks it flows through the air with a spectacular sparkle flare a shooting star make a wish its like christmas or a sweet kiss a precious gift that was sent to prevent a world of hate just to admire and appreciate a shooting star make a wish something so pure and natural its like a precious cure that revives our love and get rids of sins an angel that was from up above with thunder and winds our shooting star make a wish like singing in a mist not ever raising a fist its like lightning that glows so bright its never frighting or cause a fight it shows us the sounds of our world how wonders it is with the oceans it brings and the voices that sings its a shooting star make a wish a dream that was never seen but with this faith we can step up and shine so far and this golden shooting star can realize who we really are and face our destiny like what we were meant to be shooting star make a wish with this light so bright we won't ever be blind and always see a shooting star make a wish now its up to you and me lets be a shooting star ...... shhh make a wish!

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June 7, 2010 15:09excutterxoxo

This is absolutly beautiful Anna-srry for not commenting ur other poem tht good-I was really tired and sickk-but I loved ur other poem Silver Lining and this poem A LOT! They r both really good-whether u choose writing, singing, or whatever as a career-u shall gain much with it-I really like this-abd I've always loved shooting stars-u can even tell with the way I sign my name-the i always has a shooting star as a dot. Lolz xD this is beautiful Anna-keep it upp xoxo cya laterz xD =:3

June 7, 2010 21:53excutterxoxo

ily annie xoxo xD =:3 *virtual hug*--u rockk lmao xDD