shooting star , by angelbaby94
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whats that across the sky
something so beautiful
and shine
full of golden sparks
it flows through the air
with a spectacular sparkle flare
a shooting star
make a wish
its like christmas
or a sweet kiss
a precious gift
that was sent
to prevent
a world of hate
just to admire and appreciate
a shooting star
make a wish
something so pure
and natural
its like a precious cure
that revives our love
and get rids of sins
an angel that was from up above
with thunder and winds
our shooting star
make a wish
like singing in a mist
not ever raising a fist
its like lightning
that glows so bright
its never frighting
or cause a fight
it shows us
the sounds of our world
how wonders it is
with the oceans it brings
and the voices that sings
its a shooting star
make a wish
a dream
that was never seen
but with this faith
we can step up
and shine
so far
and this golden shooting star
can realize who we really are
and face our destiny
like what we were meant to be
shooting star
make a wish
with this light
so bright
we won't ever be blind
and always see
a shooting star
make a wish
now its up to you and me
lets be
a shooting star
...... shhh make a wish!
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Posted: 2010-06-06 22:52:52 UTC |
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2010-06-07 15:09:45 | excutterxoxo |
This is absolutly beautiful Anna-srry for not commenting ur other poem tht good-I was really tired and sickk-but I loved ur other poem Silver Lining and this poem A LOT! They r both really good-whether u choose writing, singing, or whatever as a career-u shall gain much with it-I really like this-abd I've always loved shooting stars-u can even tell with the way I sign my name-the i always has a shooting star as a dot. Lolz xD this is beautiful Anna-keep it upp xoxo cya laterz xD =:3 |
2010-06-07 21:53:35 | excutterxoxo |
ily annie xoxo xD =:3 *virtual hug*--u rockk lmao xDD |