The Girl Underwater, by CherryFender
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Down deep under
The pressure is crushing me
It's hurting to breathe
I'm scared.
I don't know what to do.
I don't even know what's going on.
But it's all to compact
with the walls closing in.
I scream. I panic.
Reason?
I'm not so sure myself why.
Chaos in my head,
just make it go away.
I want to sleep.
I want to go away,
I want things to fog up and evaporate..
I want peace please,
I feel like I'm drowing,
I'm asking peace please,
I'm the girl stuck underwater. |
Posted: 2010-06-25 08:38:30 UTC |
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2010-08-31 18:27:48 | Autumn Leaves |
Wow, amazing poem!! Very good job. I can identify perfectly. Keep writing- from what I see you are really good. |
2010-09-10 01:33:07 | bleeding beauty |
amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |