The Girl Underwater

By CherryFender • June 25, 2010 08:38 UTC

Down deep under The pressure is crushing me It's hurting to breathe I'm scared. I don't know what to do. I don't even know what's going on. But it's all to compact with the walls closing in. I scream. I panic. Reason? I'm not so sure myself why. Chaos in my head, just make it go away. I want to sleep. I want to go away, I want things to fog up and evaporate.. I want peace please, I feel like I'm drowing, I'm asking peace please, I'm the girl stuck underwater.

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August 31, 2010 18:27Autumn Leaves

Wow, amazing poem!! Very good job. I can identify perfectly. Keep writing- from what I see you are really good.

September 10, 2010 01:33bleeding beauty

amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!