the angels fall, by My.Lovenote.Has.Gone.Flat.XO Subscribe to rss feed for My.Lovenote.Has.Gone.Flat.XO

When the world was full of love
the angels watched from up above
When the world turned to war
the angels sent peace to the earth's core
today the angels cry and cry
keep asking them selves why oh why 
did they waste their precious time
on a world thats full of lies 
they have given up on us now
i dont blame them but i ask how
could we be here at this moment 
if it weren't for them
helping us along 
forever singing their peaceful song
to soothe the evil minds of man
i just dont see how we can 
survive without their helping hand 
for its the hate and war and dread
that has forced the angels to their death

miss.mysterious  


Posted: 2010-07-13 18:38:05 UTC

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2010-07-16 07:55:00CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART
This is a very gooood poem, i like it. And its true, who would wanna watch over a world that is full of lies and completely filled with BS. Very very good poem. i like it. good job

2010-07-16 15:25:57My.Lovenote.Has.Gone.Flat.XO
thank youuu

2010-08-30 19:46:23brad1990
it is very good

2011-06-17 04:57:08~Stay_Beautiful~20104
Very beautiful poem with good flow as well! Keep writing!

2012-10-21 05:59:18Mahmud Vellani
Splendid poem!