the angels fall

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By My.Lovenote.Has.Gone.Flat.XO

When the world was full of love the angels watched from up above When the world turned to war the angels sent peace to the earth's core today the angels cry and cry keep asking them selves why oh why did they waste their precious time on a world thats full of lies they have given up on us now i dont blame them but i ask how could we be here at this moment if it weren't for them helping us along forever singing their peaceful song to soothe the evil minds of man i just dont see how we can survive without their helping hand for its the hate and war and dread that has forced the angels to their death miss.mysterious

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July 16, 2010 07:55CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART

This is a very gooood poem, i like it. And its true, who would wanna watch over a world that is full of lies and completely filled with BS. Very very good poem. i like it. good job

July 16, 2010 15:25My.Lovenote.Has.Gone.Flat.XO

thank youuu

August 30, 2010 19:46brad1990

it is very good

June 17, 2011 04:57~Stay_Beautiful~20104

Very beautiful poem with good flow as well! Keep writing!

October 21, 2012 05:59Mahmud Vellani

Splendid poem!