mascara tears

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By My.Lovenote.Has.Gone.Flat.XO •

i ran down the road with black mascara tears running down my face i ran and ran to the only place where i knew i could be given peace you followed me and screamed my name but i didnt care it was just a game to you our love never meant anything i realised as i saw the place where i would make the final decision you arived just in time to see me end the pain i shouted loud so you could hear 'remember my love . i did this for you .Remember it every day when you look into her eyes that you betrayed me and forced me to this' with my last word i leaped from the stone bridge with the rope around my neck the last thing i heard was his sweet voice shout over and over 'im sorry i love you'

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July 15, 2010 11:05CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART

Oh my...this is a strong poem. It touched me. Very well written. Good job

July 18, 2010 18:43Silent-Black-Sheep

Very good poem. It's haunting and expresses the pain so well. Awesome job.

July 19, 2010 09:45My.Lovenote.Has.Gone.Flat.XO

thank you

September 22, 2010 15:17KayDe$

THIS IS A GREAT EXPRESSION OF OF PAIN AND FEELING AND I CAN RELATE.