NOT EVEN CLOSE

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By CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART

Everyday ive spent with you. i found it amazing, how much we grew. (THERE) isnt a single word to describe... how every part of me is filled with pride...and (ISNT) it funny how fast we fell apart? I should have listened to everybody or even (ANYBODY). They told me to run, far away, cause if i were to stay, ide end up being a stray. (OUT THERE) in a crazy world, all by myself, i could have been a trophie on your shelf, just (LIKE) everything else for you, a prize to stare at. Hey, your lifes fucked up, just like (YOU)

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August 9, 2010 18:49!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!

very clear feelings and playfully wording nicely done