ALREADY GONE

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By CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART

Im trying, trying very hard. To be perfect, perfect for you. Slowly im getting it, getting near perfection... But ive noticed, the closer i get... the more i notice youre already gone.

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Simple but powerful

October 9, 2010 20:49Natural_beauty_Ashe

nobodies perfect and you only strain yourself when youre trying to be,especially for some one else.pleaz dont do thas,dont try to be perfect and love yourself.dont take this as bad feedback.:)

October 11, 2010 00:36Sweet Posionous Memories

That is very powerful but it is very good also. I think you need to spend less time trying to be perfect for someone but look for someone whose trying to be perfect for you.