fantasy

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By patty •

What is this place i seem to find, always there pulling at my mind. Mystic visions that highly glow, scattered pictures of a one-man show. Searches of others that cannot be found, echoes of voices that never were shared. raise up! raise up! can you not see! this my friend is another fantasy.

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February 16, 2011 03:47patty

could someone please read , i need thoughts from readers to help me continue

thanx

June 20, 2012 18:40stsorrowscribe

A little expandable but otherwise great

February 10, 2014 05:40pat

I really like this. I feel like you had great flow up until the last line. Fantasy is kind of a hard word to incorporate, but regardless, I think you did a great job.