Lying in State, by Mykl
|
Drenched in emotions
the words spill across the page
from the gaping wound of my mind.
Angry words of raw red rage,
alliterations wet with weeping,
warring with wisdom.
wondering why we won't win.
A heart that is ailing continues railing,
till drained and paling,
finally failing.
Life poured out onto the page
to lie
in state
of mind.
Mykl Wike
May 7, 2005 |
Posted: 2005-05-17 13:08:23 UTC |
Current vote: 6. | To vote, you must be logged in.
|
To leave comments, you must be logged in.
2005-08-14 17:57:09 | Sara |
Thats very good, deep and meaningful. |
2007-04-04 03:05:31 | Simply-Me-20104 |
WOW!! I can really relate to this. It is amazing and shows SOOO much emotion. Also, thank you for the comment! Love, Me |
2007-04-07 17:17:44 | liberty moon |
wow... i am blown away the flow is wow... i love how expressive it is. please write more |
2007-04-07 17:17:48 | liberty moon |
wow... i am blown away the flow is wow... i love how expressive it is. please write more |
2007-04-18 00:55:55 | Angel of Music |
Wow u r very expressive! I like this! btw, Thanks for commenting on my poetry! |
2007-06-12 08:35:24 | User |
Full of emotion and well written..really awesome.. |
2007-08-07 01:03:46 | theworldinhell |
full of emotion and feeling shown how its like |
2009-01-15 09:51:33 | Cathi |
I love your mixture of styles. It's a very clever poem, matching style elements and words to create all the WOW of our reactions. Well done! |
2009-03-02 13:49:32 | liberty moon |
May i say you are beautiful. If you can look yourself in the mirror and say it to yourself then i think thats even better. |
2009-05-13 21:26:38 | ... |
This is amazing, so honest and passionate! It flows so well and I love the way it sounds - it was almost as though it was meant to be written it all works so well! |