Lying in State

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By Mykl •

Drenched in emotions the words spill across the page from the gaping wound of my mind. Angry words of raw red rage, alliterations wet with weeping, warring with wisdom. wondering why we won't win. A heart that is ailing continues railing, till drained and paling, finally failing. Life poured out onto the page to lie in state of mind. Mykl Wike May 7, 2005

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August 14, 2005 17:57Sara

Thats very good, deep and meaningful.

April 4, 2007 03:05Simply-Me-20104

WOW!! I can really relate to this. It is amazing and shows SOOO much emotion. Also, thank you for the comment! Love, Me

April 7, 2007 17:17liberty moon

wow... i am blown away the flow is wow... i love how expressive it is. please write more

April 7, 2007 17:17liberty moon

wow... i am blown away the flow is wow... i love how expressive it is. please write more

April 18, 2007 00:55Angel of Music

Wow u r very expressive! I like this! btw, Thanks for commenting on my poetry!

June 12, 2007 08:35User

Full of emotion and well written..really awesome..

August 7, 2007 01:03theworldinhell

full of emotion and feeling shown how its like

January 15, 2009 09:51Cathi

I love your mixture of styles. It's a very clever poem, matching style elements and words to create all the WOW of our reactions. Well done!

March 2, 2009 13:49liberty moon

May i say you are beautiful. If you can look yourself in the mirror and say it to yourself then i think thats even better.

May 13, 2009 21:26...

This is amazing, so honest and passionate! It flows so well and I love the way it sounds - it was almost as though it was meant to be written it all works so well!