First Suicide

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By Loneliness is condescending •

The day wears on unmoving animosity of empathy Tragic loneliness is all but the emptiness Listening to a silent voice Your dreams are coming true They've been along time coming So worn out Hearing them resonates inside my frame Giving in A calm panic overwhelming Regret? Peace in fleeting thoughts Death's salvation Whispers of a breakdown The echo of a scream, fading Painful awaking in a white walled room I'm still alone No ones morning Hate consumes your soul burning out you eyes "You even failed at death" Meaningless tears escape my shattered life Failure of my first suicide Still I find my hope Soon.. So soon I'll be going home Hand entwined in yours picture of forgiveness With a silent click the door seals my fate It takes just a few to show me my mistake You'll get tired of all the hate so you'll 'love' me My mind stays clear because I know Soon enough I'll be alone

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December 14, 2005 07:52lost the lonely dead

whenever you get time maybe over break you might want to print 'white borders, white walls, white supremicy" it sort of came from this poem you have here and its fairly long...maybe too much so...and it need some work...but when you get time id like you to read it and maybe suggest something if you like...its um...quiet interesting...and well i think i understand this poem 'first suicide' that you have here better than most and i'd like to give you a ten because it speaks volumes on many levels...im suprised im the first to comment...and sort of not...*hug*

March 7, 2007 01:38User

Well..I am surprised too that I am the second one to comment on this,this is a beautiful poem..vibrant and expressive,I wish I can forget the suicidal thoughts in my head but somehow it never will..