Alternate Ending, by Loneliness is condescending
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You come storming in and then all is quite
Their blood falls silently to the ground
Covering the ground and slowly eats away the souls of men
And the silent screams of the dead shall echo over the
Filed for the rest of eternity crying out for forgiveness
Unable to deal with the emptiness
Forgotten by all pushed in to the past
Struggling to be heard but there's no one left to listen
This Silence speaks for everyone |
Posted: 2006-04-16 18:42:36 UTC |
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2006-03-03 15:12:19 | lost the lonely dead |
one of your best i really love it, the begining seems a little off to me at frist but its good, i like the line "and the silent screams of the dead shall echo over the filed for the rest of eternity crying out for forgiveness" and then "this silence speaks for everyone" |