Alternate Ending

By Loneliness is condescending • April 16, 2006 18:42 UTC

You come storming in and then all is quite Their blood falls silently to the ground Covering the ground and slowly eats away the souls of men And the silent screams of the dead shall echo over the Filed for the rest of eternity crying out for forgiveness Unable to deal with the emptiness Forgotten by all pushed in to the past Struggling to be heard but there's no one left to listen This Silence speaks for everyone

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March 3, 2006 15:12lost the lonely dead

one of your best i really love it, the begining seems a little off to me at frist but its good, i like the line "and the silent screams of the dead shall echo over the filed for the rest of eternity crying out for forgiveness" and then "this silence speaks for everyone"