The Final Good-bye

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By eleanor maslen

That moment when you kissed me, as soon as your lips touched mine I fell in love with you. I never wanted our lips to part. I wanted to stay in the moment until the world crumbleded, and there was nothing left. just us locked in a dream world one that we were sharing. just us, no one else to taint or destroy it. No part of it was anyone esles. two people trapped in an intermet embrace. that sparkeled and glowed in posibilities. You pulled away and it was shattered, like ice dropped from a great height. My hopes and dreams fell in front of me as i watched you walk awayand i knew that i would never lay eyes on you again.

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July 5, 2011 02:34Daisy

How sad but beautiful. The moment unforgetable. The memory will never die now that it it on the net.

August 7, 2011 08:04Natural_beauty_Ashe

I really love this and I can relate because I know this feeling

August 10, 2011 16:25Cortney shea.

I can relate to this poem.
Its short and powerful.
Very well written.