TOGETHER FOREVER

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By Natural_beauty_Ashe •

we were still young but our love was too great for us to be separated over any stupid mistake so to avoid all of this something had to be done so i put two bullets into my fathers gun first i shot you before you had time to awake then i shot myself because it was a sacrifice i had to make i knew that if we were this way everything we would be better i knew that after all of this we could be together forever

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December 22, 2011 01:05lance

sacrafice and ending,,,,,,2 main ingredients for a good poem

February 5, 2012 02:03Natural_beauty_Ashe

true....thanks and feel free to tell me where i need improvement :)