TOGETHER FOREVER , by Natural_beauty_Ashe
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we were still young but our love was too great
for us to be separated over any stupid mistake
so to avoid all of this something had to be done
so i put two bullets into my fathers gun
first i shot you before you had time to awake
then i shot myself because it was a sacrifice i had to make
i knew that if we were this way everything we would be
better
i knew that after all of this we could be together forever
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Posted: 2011-07-04 04:57:41 UTC |
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2011-12-22 01:05:57 | lance |
sacrafice and ending,,,,,,2 main ingredients for a good poem |
2012-02-05 02:03:47 | Natural_beauty_Ashe |
true....thanks and feel free to tell me where i need improvement :) |