HELP ME???.....PLEASE, by Natural_beauty_Ashe
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when something appears to be wrong with me
your always the first who seems to know
the first thing you do is grab my wrists
and there the cuts will show
you see the cuts on top of scars that havent had a chance to
heal
and with love in your eyes, you ask me why
and before you my ashamed head kneels
when i tel you things you try and understand
but the truth is you never will
like you have said yourself before
you can only get an image of my pain yo cant feel
i love you and im hoping that yo lobe me
so all i ask from you is your help
PLEASE??????
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| Posted: 2011-07-10 12:02:09 UTC |
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| 2011-07-26 06:24:31 | ~Stay_Beautiful~20104 |
| This is packed with a lot of meaning. I know that, unfortunately, a lot of people can relate to it, which is the point of poetry! But I also like that I shows how important it is to have someone to talk to, someone to lean on ever once in awhile.... |
| 2011-08-04 02:54:16 | ~**AGE_TEA**~ |
| it helps to write about it. and other can always relate to it. good job and i am glad that you have someone you can lean on. and also love is 2ways. get love and give love. share it.. it helps to share wen ur baggage are full. love the way u put it in a poem form. great job! |