HELP ME???.....PLEASE

By Natural_beauty_Ashe • July 10, 2011 12:02 UTC

when something appears to be wrong with me your always the first who seems to know the first thing you do is grab my wrists and there the cuts will show you see the cuts on top of scars that havent had a chance to heal and with love in your eyes, you ask me why and before you my ashamed head kneels when i tel you things you try and understand but the truth is you never will like you have said yourself before you can only get an image of my pain yo cant feel i love you and im hoping that yo lobe me so all i ask from you is your help PLEASE??????

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July 26, 2011 06:24~Stay_Beautiful~20104

This is packed with a lot of meaning. I know that, unfortunately, a lot of people can relate to it, which is the point of poetry! But I also like that I shows how important it is to have someone to talk to, someone to lean on ever once in awhile....

July 26, 2011 16:46Natural_beauty_Ashe

thank you for your comment

August 4, 2011 02:54~**AGE_TEA**~

it helps to write about it. and other can always relate to it. good job and i am glad that you have someone you can lean on. and also love is 2ways. get love and give love. share it.. it helps to share wen ur baggage are full. love the way u put it in a poem form. great job!

August 7, 2011 04:00Natural_beauty_Ashe

Thank you