To die

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By eleanor maslen

the little girl was not scared, she had seen many horrid things in her life. She could feel the slow trickle of blood down one side of her face, but she could feel no pain - she could not cry and she could not scream. she could feel the coldness of the night and hear the yells. She felt her feet and ankles get wet and cold, slowly the water began to rise, at her chest should could feel the water making it hard for her to breath, she looked to her side to her mother. Her eyes were closed and her face was red. like a lifetime the water come to her neck and then her lips and the little girl closed her eyes, she knew what dying was, and she was not afraid. She would see grandma and rex her dog. the little girl did not feel anything as the water passed her eyes. then she heard to the banging, but she was to tired to open them, she felt strong arms tugging at her, but she was to comfortable to be moved, she felt the cold snap as her head broke the through the water, but her rescuer was to late. The little girl had already gone.

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September 8, 2011 01:57Jameela

This is so creative :)

September 9, 2011 14:48Tara Maslen

So emotive and sad. Actually have tears in my eyes.