Rape(7)

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By <b>Dark Neko</b> •

The terrifying look he gives me, that threatening, petrifying voice, stays upon within me, even when he's gone. That solid, hollow face, those gleaming brown eyes show anger and hate, as he rapes me. You dont know what pain is, until you've experienced this, those forceful pushes show no remorse Ones you could never forget. He doesnt care if I cry He doesnt care if it hurts, It's all about him He doesn't care about me. Rape is like stealing, stealing the victim's trust, confidence, self-esteem, sometimes even their life.

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June 17, 2005 06:04just me_

this is really brave. i write about everything that's happened to me and yet i still cant write about that.. even still that no one here knows who i am. i really like how you put it.

June 17, 2005 06:04just me_

this is really brave. i write about everything that's happened to me and yet i still cant write about that.. even still that no one here knows who i am. i really like how you put it.

July 3, 2005 09:23just me_

i just finished a piece like this i'd really like your opinion on. its called 'It's Been So Long.' If you have the time i'd really like to know what you think, after all it was your poem that helped me get mine into words.

August 22, 2005 21:20Vanishedchild

Hey mel... wow, that's pretty much true, I kinda know from experiance... lol although that isn't something to be proud of but meh...

January 30, 2006 00:34Love Dragon

That is really sad. You are very brave.
I like how you wrote it. If it really did happen to you or someone you know I am sorry.

January 31, 2006 22:08B.H.D.S

Tell the police
you need help if this is happening
don't wait to long

March 15, 2006 16:40XRebzX

I would like to say well done on writing something that most people find hard to write about. It's excellently written!