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By xXJoshXx •

Dying the death of 1000 men. Feeling the pain of the 7 deadly sins. I write of God, but he has left me alone. I guess I let go, of my "unbreakable chain of hope". I believed in his word, but how can I now? He has walked out on me and let me down. I look but I can not see, this God, that is believe by so many to be. He is suppose to lift you up when you have fallen down, not let you fall even further, and stomp you in the ground. If you can hear me God, you have taken my faith. You have taken the light from my days. Everyone remembers all that you did, what about all that you didn't? You have let me down, and you can't be forgiven. (I have written this poem for a person who has opened my eyes to a different aspect of our "God". Noone has any actual proof of him. These words are not of my belief, but I felt that I really owed the person the other side of "Unbreakable" which is a poem that I wrote, and I was heavily criticized over.)

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May 18, 2007 05:20Angel of Music

Nice job.

May 4, 2008 23:54lost in my own confessions

i refuse to belive in god.
there is no truth behind his so called "miricles"!
there is no such thing.
only because a person survives after being shot in the head does not make it a miricle. it makes proof that the one who has treated him to be well trained. i do not belive that there is a certain god that is here to answer our prayers.
but there is a battle that will never end.
NEVER!
if only there was a god.
and whats up with jesus?
we are waiting for him to come back from heaven to save us all from our death and pain.
and yet if we were to go to heaven. then wouldnt that be the same thing as dieing?!?!!
think about that one.
and i agree. this is a wonderful poem.