Lovely Demise

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By Simply-Me-20104

So hurt... So lost Out of control The pain, a cost Losing my hold Foot slipped, falling World going dark Danger calling Life is so stark A confused heart Breaking away Can't fall apart Can't end this way Tumbling down Descending fast Can't make a sound One breath, my last. 10:46pm 12-11-11 *May change the title? Attempt at an ABAB format. I also don't use separate stanzas very much. Thanks for reading!

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February 13, 2012 18:35Convalescence

lovely poem. one of few on this site worth reading.