Dark Thoughts

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By lance

pain kills my mind my soul is doin time lost in tears that have yet to fall i'm caught between two walls world dies life is ending where i'll be that is pending learned to love and hate as i stand at the devils gate fear him not i will not stay for his life to be slained smile as i laugh and love gods tears fall from above mountains shake and stars will fall i don't care i've seen it all don't forget your friends and family too through this bullshit they stayed with you another day another time another pen another rhyme i'm caught between two walls............as i watch the world fall.

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April 4, 2012 05:01Natural_beauty_Ashe

Two words......love it,it is deffinitely an imteresting topic and if I must say so in a positive way,your a very interesting talented poet

April 14, 2012 05:07Areik

wow this was a really good poem! I really loved it! so much focus and force.. it was just brilliant! :)