A Little Bit Deeper

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By J. K. Maxwell •

Your voice; A little bit deeper This time. Your words hit A little bit deeper This time. They stab A little bit deeper This time. Into my heart, A little bit deeper This time. My thoughts are A little bit deeper This time. My hurt set A little bit deeper This time. I sink A little bit deeper This time. I cut A little bit deeper This time. Puddles of blood; A little bit deeper This time. I sleep A little bit deeper This time.

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July 20, 2005 20:15abs

i like it im not quite sure why not my usual thing but something about it is really catchy.

November 17, 2005 05:35~JaLeEsA lOvEs PoLkA dOtS~

I loved it!!

January 6, 2007 17:01BananaIceCream

brilliant, simple and i liked the ending

May 15, 2007 23:18Angel of Music

Great job! I really liked this one too!