Ol' Traveler

By artemis44149 •
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very cool
hobo of life song! i like this poem for it's simple hearted charm.especially the last paragraph bout knot changing his center,his personality,his/her hobo's heart.old fashioned simple human charm is what caught my eye about this piece.reminds me of leonard cohen's song about being a Gypsy Jewish Boy deep inn his heart!the description of the bed is really quite something to be treasured! highest vote i have given in poetry so far.needs only just a little bit more tightening and polish to get a nine out of me! i like how the poem ends with constancy and philosophy of traveling and glancing in his own manner..."going on his ol' way!"....hoboing and beading would go hand in hand i think! a renegado attitude that he can knot shake while he kicks of the dirt of his hobo shoes! "corner of an eye,one blink,and you'll miss me-you'll pass me right by" reminds me of a gentleman of long ago!
Xciting was he! Best poem I have read this mourning!
hobo of life song! i like this poem for it's simple hearted charm.especially the last paragraph bout knot changing his center,his personality,his/her hobo's heart.old fashioned simple human charm is what caught my eye about this piece.reminds me of leonard cohen's song about being a Gypsy Jewish Boy deep inn his heart!the description of the bed is really quite something to be treasured! highest vote i have given in poetry so far.needs only just a little bit more tightening and polish to get a nine out of me! i like how the poem ends with constancy and philosophy of traveling and glancing in his own manner..."going on his ol' way!"....hoboing and beading would go hand in hand i think! a renegado attitude that he can knot shake while he kicks of the dirt of his hobo shoes! "corner of an eye,one blink,and you'll miss me-you'll pass me right by" reminds me of a gentleman of long ago!
Xciting was he! Best poem I have read this mourning!
bloody hell that is unbelievable! it sounds like its straight from a poetry book, u really have a way with words and such a great and intresting concept, instead of the over-used love, heartbreak and suicide. finely put together and excellently executed cant stop reading it i love it (incase u hadnt picked that up already!)