going home, by eleanor maslen Subscribe to rss feed for eleanor maslen

I wrote you a letter
sealed with a kiss
took it to the ocean
slit my wrists

it was pretty
in that place
i saw you there
your loving face

i guess its hell
im going too
i'll never be happy
not without you

you are my home
my only light
the reason i wake
the reason i fight

whats the point
now your gone
i cant stay here
i cant be strong

it wasnt just you
didnt leave alone
cause daddy,
you are my home.


Posted: 2012-06-22 20:52:01 UTC

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2012-08-04 19:38:49Slightest Sound
wow at the end where you wrote daddy you are my home i got tears in my eyes literally, awesome

2013-01-02 22:41:56 Thank you.
Great job

2013-01-12 06:52:58Shane Rasmusson
Very simple and raw. The emotion is in those words along with the pain.

2013-04-01 19:59:20mitra
you are my home my only light the reason i wake the reason i fight cause daddy, you are my home beautiful beautiful beautiful truly touching for me.