going home

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By eleanor maslen •

I wrote you a letter sealed with a kiss took it to the ocean slit my wrists it was pretty in that place i saw you there your loving face i guess its hell im going too i'll never be happy not without you you are my home my only light the reason i wake the reason i fight whats the point now your gone i cant stay here i cant be strong it wasnt just you didnt leave alone cause daddy, you are my home.

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August 4, 2012 19:38Slightest Sound

wow at the end where you wrote daddy you are my home i got tears in my eyes literally, awesome

January 2, 2013 22:41 Thank you.

Great job

January 12, 2013 06:52Shane Rasmusson

Very simple and raw. The emotion is in those words along with the pain.

April 1, 2013 19:59mitra

you are my home
my only light
the reason i wake
the reason i fight


cause daddy,
you are my home
beautiful beautiful beautiful truly touching for me.