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Tell me
Am I ugly?
Since you haven't noticed me.
Am I too thin? Not thin enough?
Am I too gentle? Am I too tough?
Am I too quiet? Too loud?
Am I too shy? Too into the crowd?
Whatever it is, I can change
Although I won't be the same
But if it will make you see me
I have to at least try and see
What's the worst that could be done?
Broken heart, fake trust, you've won?
Tell me
Am I ugly
Since you want to change me.
Posted: 2005-06-09 16:56:43 UTC

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2005-06-21 17:03:02strange girl.
No, I look for internal beauty, that you have, outside I fancy you so much, No, YOU ARE NOT UGLY!!!

2005-06-28 07:06:23Lillian
You should never change your own beautiful person for someone else. If they want you to change, they suck. It may seem impossible, but its true there is always someone out there that will love you just the way you are and continue to do so forever. Really nice work :)

2006-03-01 22:19:55.:side:walk:.
I feel the same way sometimes, its so hard to cope with life and looks! But be strong, you have your own individuality of beauty, don't let that person bring you down. I like this poem because everyone can relate to this! You write great poems!

2008-05-29 02:42:16Nora Eason
WOW!