~ Untouched ~

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By FirePoet

The night rumbled with the storm. Lightening and thunder crashing, Silhouetted by flickering light, a woman's form On the winds, enticing,the scent of innocence. Overwhelming, the dashing man with eyes of jade. Knowing he needed to get nearer Like a thief, her lair he did invade. The scent of her innocence grew stronger. Within her chamber silently he feasted. Through the window, winds whipped her raven hair. Thus far, he had gone undetected. Turning slowly his eyes met her dark stare. He stood frozen, unable to move. The sheer window panels blew about her like wings His gaze from her he was unable to remove. This angel awoke in him such passions and yearnings. He moved out of the shadow, His jade eyes searching hers, finding them lifeless. Her dark eyes a sea of hollow Which he could not swim, he'd drowned in their emptiness. He spoke to her quietly, softly But his words fell on deafs ear Raising his voice he spoke fiercely Useless attempts, her being both blind and unable to hear. She glided her way around the chamber. He wanted this angel's innocence " Who's there?" She called out to her dark visitor From her world, a void of darkness. To this jade eyed vampire, she was immune. She could not be tempted by this dark immortal. His passions and yearnings for her not bestrewn, To her, he was invisible ~ Nothing more than intoxication, an unknown scent whispering on the winds unseen...unheard...untouched ~ ~ Fire Poet ~ (C)hrc 2005

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June 28, 2005 15:24April BLue

interesting choice of words.eye feel like her deep down innside.emptiness and despair for years will take u there.men ruin women for their own gain.pain for pleasure.surprised that you could reach down deep enough to taste her pain.guess that is what the true sense of vampire love is really all about.enjoy!

March 18, 2007 19:23Chalan

I thought that this was very good! thank you for your comments on my poem.