With or Without you, by diamond
|
I am confussed
not in mind
but at heart
You say you're there
but nowhere to be found
there for me
and yet I'm lonely
Why must you reassure me not
I am there for you
I care for you
and still I wonder "Why"
I can't breath when I am in your presence
I cannot think when I am without you
I cannot love when I have no one there
I am with knowledge that in order to be happy I must leave
but without knowledge on how to when I feel I need you
You're like an addiction I can't live with
or without
Help me
my heart
to find a way out
with or without you
I need to be happy
I need to love you
I want to love you and only you
you are the cure to me
-diamond-
Please respond truthfully and let me know what you think. I
am really a first time writter. |
| Posted: 2005-06-14 03:27:20 UTC |
| Current vote: 8. | To vote, you must be logged in.
|
To leave comments, you must be logged in.
| 2005-06-14 23:05:42 | The Irish Child |
| I think this is totally amazing.
It actualy describes whatI am going through at the moment. Wonderful Work.
~~Kendra~~ |
| 2005-10-03 20:47:51 | XRebzX |
| i really do like this poem, it reminds me of how i feel about my ex, good choice of words |
| 2005-10-10 22:05:10 | Don't build lies on ice cubes. |
| This poem reminds me of my current dilema... Its really well written, the last line particularly stays... |
| 2005-10-11 03:56:50 | AUSTIN |
| I like this poem. --AUSTIN-- |
| 2005-11-23 00:10:01 | StrawberryStud |
| Wow, if this doesn't take the stills of my life and put them into words, I don't know what does. This is me and what i'm going through right as I type this comment. You are very insightful. I admire your work. |