With or Without you

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By diamond •

I am confussed not in mind but at heart You say you're there but nowhere to be found there for me and yet I'm lonely Why must you reassure me not I am there for you I care for you and still I wonder "Why" I can't breath when I am in your presence I cannot think when I am without you I cannot love when I have no one there I am with knowledge that in order to be happy I must leave but without knowledge on how to when I feel I need you You're like an addiction I can't live with or without Help me my heart to find a way out with or without you I need to be happy I need to love you I want to love you and only you you are the cure to me -diamond- Please respond truthfully and let me know what you think. I am really a first time writter.

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June 14, 2005 23:05The Irish Child

I think this is totally amazing.
It actualy describes whatI am going through at the moment. Wonderful Work.
~~Kendra~~

October 3, 2005 20:47XRebzX

i really do like this poem, it reminds me of how i feel about my ex, good choice of words

October 10, 2005 22:05Don't build lies on ice cubes.

This poem reminds me of my current dilema... Its really well written, the last line particularly stays...

October 11, 2005 03:56AUSTIN

I like this poem. --AUSTIN--

November 23, 2005 00:10StrawberryStud

Wow, if this doesn't take the stills of my life and put them into words, I don't know what does. This is me and what i'm going through right as I type this comment. You are very insightful. I admire your work.

April 14, 2010 00:48Gawjous Idiot

gooooood. :D