Slam poetry piece in the works. Constructive criticism would be

The only thing that I should have promised was not to promise anything because when I said that I would never be dishonest or unkind I really only meant that I would try and when I said that I would try I only meant sometimes because I have a pile of bad habits in my backyard that are piling up and not enough bones in my body to account for all the wrongs I've committed.