Can't You See?

By InLoveWithLoverBoy •
Can't you see
What you're doing to me
Don't you see
What I see
Do you feel
What I feel
Can't you see?
By InLoveWithLoverBoy •
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A simple poem with a strong personal message that most of us try to send at some time during out lives. Lovely work.
short but sweet its strong! you can convey your meaning very well!
THIS IS VERY SIMPLE BUT GETS STRAIGHT TO THE POITN, I LIKE IT