Destiny's End (9), by ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~ ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~ "> |
One path a future ,one path a goal, one heart a chalice ,which seems to guide the whole. rules learned and wished for, the knowledge to survive and not realizing destiny's on the rise. Words spoke of destiny and always in the plus, never realizing ,but making too much fuss. wishes for tomorrow which light a different day, hoping that the call of love will gladly come their way, ultimately love will surley find it's place. Then all too soon it happened,the words a final fate, this love that was profoundly true,has opened another gate. this forever that was spoken of ,didn't even wait. who brings these calls upon my life without a guest invite, is it simply destiny, or lover's having a fight? I know there is an end today as I have never known, for within this bleeding heart of mine ,there is no one left at home. © Copyright gloria/glostarg 6-18-2005 |
Posted: 2009-11-10 19:26:14 UTC |
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2005-08-05 18:15:07 | AHopelessMemory |
i love this!! i deffently feel i relate to this |
2005-10-14 17:26:39 | .xx:+.Disposable.Darling.+:xx. |
i like the way you write, i've read a couple of your poems now but i have to say this is my favourite. beautiful :). |
2005-12-05 18:02:56 | Kirsty (living in the light) |
ive adde you to my favourites so i can just come back to your poetry as it is so awesome |
2005-12-06 07:26:10 | Spiritual Beauty |
I really love this poem, i think it will be sth that will make my day for a long time. |
2007-01-20 03:01:20 | sk8t3R gal 4 eva |
this is sooo good! it gives me alot of hope in many things. it touched me. i love it! |
2008-01-05 04:46:28 | Sheila |
You are really talented |
2008-01-10 03:31:52 | Sheila |
Gloria, how long you been writing and where did you get your copyright? Message me back.Here or the other website. |
2008-02-15 07:30:39 | Invisible Poet |
its really hard to get feedback on this sight if you dont have a bagillion poems |
2009-11-07 07:38:35 | Chuck Shorter |
Hey Glo, I'm back after a looooooong break. Been tied down with some unavoidable hassles. By the grace of God things look better now. Jus read this old poem of yours. The rhyme and meter are great, however greater still is depth of your feeling and profound understanding of the claustrophobia of loneliness, especially when it comes to changing one's own destiny. Yo' the best Glo! don't evah stop writin'. As always, with much Love, Chuck |