Destiny's End (9)

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By <font color= "white"> ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~ •

<font color="navy"><i><b> One path a future ,one path a goal, one heart a chalice ,which seems to guide the whole. rules learned and wished for, the knowledge to survive and not realizing destiny's on the rise. Words spoke of destiny and always in the plus, never realizing ,but making too much fuss. wishes for tomorrow which light a different day, hoping that the call of love will gladly come their way, ultimately love will surley find it's place. Then all too soon it happened,the words a final fate, this love that was profoundly true,has opened another gate. this forever that was spoken of ,didn't even wait. who brings these calls upon my life without a guest invite, is it simply destiny, or lover's having a fight? I know there is an end today as I have never known, for within this bleeding heart of mine ,there is no one left at home. © Copyright gloria/glostarg 6-18-2005

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August 5, 2005 18:15AHopelessMemory

i love this!! i deffently feel i relate to this

October 14, 2005 17:26.xx:+.Disposable.Darling.+:xx.

i like the way you write, i've read a couple of your poems now but i have to say this is my favourite. beautiful :).

December 5, 2005 18:02 Kirsty (living in the light)

ive adde you to my favourites so i can just come back to your poetry as it is so awesome

December 6, 2005 07:26Spiritual Beauty

I really love this poem, i think it will be sth that will make my day for a long time.

January 20, 2007 03:01sk8t3R gal 4 eva

this is sooo good! it gives me alot of hope in many things. it touched me. i love it!

January 5, 2008 04:46Sheila

You are really talented

January 10, 2008 03:31Sheila

Gloria, how long you been writing and where did you get your copyright? Message me back.Here or the other website.

February 15, 2008 07:30Invisible Poet

its really hard to get feedback on this sight if you dont have a bagillion poems

November 7, 2009 07:38Chuck Shorter

Hey Glo, I'm back after a looooooong break. Been tied down with some unavoidable hassles. By the grace of God things look better now. Jus read this old poem of yours. The rhyme and meter are great, however greater still is depth of your feeling and profound understanding of the claustrophobia of loneliness, especially when it comes to changing one's own destiny. Yo' the best Glo! don't evah stop writin'.
As always,
with much Love,
Chuck