Inside Out

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By <b>. QUEENIE .</b>

as i stare off into space, watching as another tear falls off my face wondering whow i got to this distant place. nothing fits, and nothing works all i know is everything hurts dying from the inside out with no one there to hear my shout and another tear drops as teh tears fall and my heart aches why is there no end? i need someone to say they love me and everything will be okay i need these words, here today something's wrong im not who i was there's a terrible place where all my fears lurk but i cannot face where am i now? here. here is not where i want to be please, can't someone help me? and as my tears drop and break, i remember, and cannot understand. xox Kyelle

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August 2, 2005 14:30Silent Cries

I can understand

August 21, 2005 21:54. QUEENIE .

thnx 4 the feedback

November 5, 2005 15:32In_Pain_&_Your_The_Cure

wow. that is really heart filled. Is it true or not?

November 7, 2005 23:03. QUEENIE .

yeah, it was at the time. :) mostly all my poems are just what i was feeling.

this is fantastic i just had to comment i have just started looking through your poetry and this one truly stuck out at me well done you have a gift! xxx

November 24, 2005 20:40~*Amo*~

amazing, all off them,
ur feelings shine through
deffinetly ur user info i luved that

November 25, 2005 14:30. QUEENIE .

wow thanks everytone!!! i appreciae that loads, you made me blush too. tee hee

June 27, 2006 02:01User

Everyone needs to feel loved but it is
sad that we feel out of place so often..

June 28, 2006 00:32. QUEENIE .

mmh, the world is a cruel place.

June 2, 2007 02:28.:side:walk:.

I understand, this is exactly how I feel, sometimes it's so hard to accept. This poem is amazing! keep it up!

February 15, 2008 07:10Invisible Poet

hope to one day be up to this writing prowess, maybe you could comment some of my poems with tips and advice thnx

December 1, 2009 15:16Convalescence

I know exactly how u feel.. and it sucks.