***DISORDER***

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By chicken scratch love •

Casually killing my innermost feelings It's a maintenance plan It's a shedding of old skin That keeps me from exceeding my ceiling With a sheltered life, it's hard to thrive It measures your drink It controls your blink Deciding my drive? Not I This is a secondary life; a "me" standing by If my primary fails It quickly unveils Splicing, not wasting of time It's mechanic mentality is my human duality 1 won't fight 2 will bite But TOGETHER, they make up the "it" in me How confused you must've been when I called you, "my friend" I've pushed you And broke you My footprint on your chin My mental instability will always hold you dear to me So run And leave me to die

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January 28, 2014 05:41~Stay_Beautiful~20104

Thank you for the comment on my poem!! I love the flow and form of this one. It is very unique and original. I fight my own habits and try to create pieces like this, but never can! The word choices were great and the mood was well crafted. Great piece!