Color My World (The same old thing.)

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By ZeTz_Darke

Take this paintbrush and color my world. When I was little i began a painting. I used a little red, a tiny hint of passion, Fire and bloodshed, heat and compassion. A consumated factor, a heated reaction...and anger. I used a little blue, to reach for the sky. Before the day fades into night, the rain that So often does inspire. Oceans, and seas, a stertch of transparency... The limitless things promised, that we should aspire. I used a little green, A little life, and a little death. Both beautiful and sickly things, illness and peace and rest. Nature and Nurture, jealousy and thought. Beauty and creation, and after when things created rot. I used a little Yellow, light and relaxation. Energy and recovery, clear mindedness and elation. Sunny summer joy, a golden times that were. memories and mornings, soon to be a blur. I used a lot of colors,adding in each one just right. In all of the places I sall neccasary, along the course of life. I added in some purple, for reaching all of my goals... And a little orange, to remain healthy and whole... I added in some earthy colors, so i'd ever remember who I am... And lastly I added white, To always be everything I can... And I mixed the colors through my life, so every day would be lit up... With everything I needed, so I'd always have enough... In the beginning I believed there was nothing there to lack. It wasn't till much later I realised All the colors mix to black.

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June 30, 2005 15:05Loreleen

holy jesus you are good, lol

July 1, 2005 20:49Apache Rose

A technicolour masterpiece with a pleasingly pessimistic ending. You are a poet after my own heart.

July 5, 2005 05:20Kellz

i really like this poem. you're diction is great and i really enjoy the colors. great!

July 20, 2005 19:13abs

wow this poem is fab! i really really like it, i have read a lot of your others but this is definately the best!the colours are great and the idea at the end of mixing up black is genius.