I Gave You Everything

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By XRebzX

I gave you my life, I gave you my all, I gave you my love, so I stood tall I gave you my trust, I gave you my affection, I gave you my view on life as a whole perception, So why be this way? why act like this? I love you so much and it hurts me inside, When i think about you and how you lied, Nobody has ever made me feel this way, and i try to deal with it day by day, My love was like an ocean, calm and free Until you killed it and killed me, You used me, you messed with me all the time, like I'd comitted some sort of crime, Is it a crime to love you? To want you? To need you? My love for you was always true, and now i don't know what to do without you, I love you and i hate you, i'm so confused and i allowed myself to be used and now it's all over, there's an empty space, in my heart, in my head, all over the place I gave you my life and you destroyed it I gave you everything For Ben Copyright Rebecca Waring

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I like these poems :) The loneliness one is good too, but this one I like a lot. Im always confused, that feeling doesnt go away :( xxx

June 29, 2005 19:30XRebzX

thanx, i appreciate it

June 30, 2005 18:12Anabelle

Really cool. You should read my "STILL HERE". I'm sure you'll relate.

July 17, 2005 17:37Laura

Rebz, it is really nice to see how you are able to say what others can't. I really like this poem

July 23, 2005 22:19XRebzX

thanx very much

February 14, 2006 07:45ChuKico PrIme

wow. that's strong! i like it a lot.

March 12, 2006 05:38little_irish_rose

wow... i really relate to this one alot.... its so amazing i really like it.... u did a great job on it... wow....

March 15, 2006 17:17Dark Neko

Beautiful poem, I loved it. And I wanna say thanks for the comment on my poem. So thank youuu! xx

September 16, 2006 17:37In_Pain_&_Your_The_Cure

beauty....just a beauty. your poems are very heart felt. thank you for you comments also. you seem to have a lot going on

September 21, 2006 23:03Dimplegirl

i really like this poem of yours. its kind of what i feel right now.. confused -_-

February 7, 2007 19:30BananaIceCream

i can relate to this

May 18, 2007 00:27Angel of Music

This is truly beautiful! great job! Keep of the great work. Love Amanda